tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1693262813645169591.post765611586612873873..comments2023-05-08T10:20:47.991+01:00Comments on Graeme Daly Computer Animation Arts Rochester: Alfred Hitchcock - The Birds Reviewgraeme dalyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06734112466583600784noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1693262813645169591.post-8572335546387653022017-02-16T12:23:34.717+00:002017-02-16T12:23:34.717+00:00Sorry Jackie I should have proof read it a few mor...Sorry Jackie I should have proof read it a few more times, thanks for the advice :)graeme dalyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06734112466583600784noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1693262813645169591.post-50715093011146502892017-02-16T11:22:24.786+00:002017-02-16T11:22:24.786+00:00Hi Graeme,
Couple of pointers... make sure that a...Hi Graeme,<br /><br />Couple of pointers... make sure that all of your quotes are italicized - the one by Alcock has been forgotten. <br />You have 'woman' in the singular on several occasions, when I think it should be plural 'women'?<br />Be careful using film terms without explaining them to the reader - here for example,<br /><br />'The birds in the movie are a McGuffin...'<br /><br />If your reader is unaware what a McGuffin is, they could read this as being the species of bird... :) Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com